Kowhai's 5 Fan Fiction Links

Beelzebub

 Oga has just found himself the father of a child he never sired and the woman who is the nurse mid of the child tells him that baby Be’el is the prince to the demonic throne, and he will be the one to wipe out humanity, not only that but now the three will be living together… indefinitely. His parents and sister believe that the child is his, not listening to his protests at all, and that Hilda, the pretty foreigner, is the unlucky mother. Now they share a room and Oga has to get used to it.

I liked this piece and am going to continue reading it. It was very close to the original, a more in depth view of the manga, almost. The profanity, the silent derision all was executed perfectly. I was impressed that they managed to catch Oga, the main character, so well. I can’t wait to read a piece when baby Be’el is awake and causing chaos.  

Black lagoon

This piece of  fan fiction is set up on multiple pages in an interviewing system. The writer makes themselves the interviweer and interviews each member of the black lagoon cast. One on one is how it starts but the characters start interupting and hurting the interviewer, sending them to the hospital multiple times for multiple reasons.

The first interview is really funny and captures the character Revvy really well, but as you click the “next” button and read more interviews the characters start to get rowdy and the interviewer gets more and more disorganised. It starts off as funny but gets a little boring after a while. The use of profanity in some pieces makes you believe that the characters are being interviewed but in other places its unnecessary and puts down the whole story.

Kingdom hearts

Sora fights heartless with his friends, Leon, Uffie and Aerith they are slowly being overwhelmed but they fight on. Zemnes has a plan, and to filfill that plan he needs the weilder of the key blade, he needs Sora. Organsation 13 move out under Zemnes’s order. Knowing they cant take the young keyblade weilder alone they team up surrounding him, subduing him, kidnapping him. His friends fight knowing in their hearts that its too late, Sora has been taken by the enemy.

There are three different view points in this story, and not all those points of views are of the heros. Not much particularily happened, I think it’s a set up for the rest of the story, a teaser to get you hooked. It’s a bit long and a few pieces are long winded, but it does end with you wanting to know more, it leaves you with questions that if you like kingdom hearts, you would want answers to.

Alice in wonderland. 

Alice is fighting and Chesire is worried. Her luck is bound to run out. One day she will be too slow to go into her hellish mode, where her eyes drip blood, one day she will slip on the tar flung by the insidious ruins. At that point, chesire is afraid that he wont be there in time to save her. At that time, Alice would die and chesire will be alone. In that moment  he would give all his lives just to have her back, but she will be gone.

  

Nine lives.

Very short but somehow long enough to get Cheshire’s feelings across. I think that its sad as I've played the game and seen the banter that goes on between the two. No one ever picks up on what feelings Chesire has behind that grinning face, but if his feelings were explained, then I think the person who wrote this has the right idea of what they would be.

 One Piece + Danny Phantom cross over

Kiara Blake, an ordinary girl in an ordinary world. she loves the anime one piece and the cartoon Danny Phntom, as she drifts off to sleep she makes a wish on a star, "I wish I had really cool powers just like Danny Phantom's… And I wish I could be in the world of One Piece!" As she drifts off to sleep a small laugh is followed by a whisper "So you wish it… So it shall be…!"

I like the lead up to this story. It starts off in the normal world, showing normality by the small things like an argument scene between the main character and her sister. It introduces the anime and cartoon realistically by saying that the main character was watching a re-run marathon. The piece about wishing on a star is a nice classic touch and the small whisper after the wish is made and after the main character has fallen asleep adds a touch of expectation where the reader is sure they know what is going to happen, without the writer specifically saying it. The writer leaves us with a dramatic cliff hanger which just makes me want more.