Tuesday, 7 August 2012

Jennet's Fan-fiction Draft


Well i've decided to do mine in the Weather Wardens World, imagined by Rachel Caine.

Here's one of the covers 
of this 9 part series ---------------------->

Anyway, I haven't read this in a while so I might get some of the info wrong... hopefully it wont put off any one who has read it :)



















Heres a a bit of what I wrote.

I awoke to find myself laying face down in the dirt. There was a sour taste in my mouth, my head felt like it had ripped apart and my body felt stiff, like I had slept for days. 
“Come one Mia," I said to myself, "Remember.” I fought through the fog in my head and remembered that a tornado had hit before I blacked out. Wow i’m thirsty I though feeling how dry my throat was. Luckily as I lifted my head off the ground, I found myself looking at a water bottle that was smeared with mud and dirt. Please contain water! My bones cracked as I reached out for it. I opened it and peered inside. It was empty. I was about to throw it away in irritation but then the ground started to shake and smoke stared to appear. From the distance I could see someone walking towards me.
“Help me” I croaked, My voice barely more than a whisper. As the stranger neared my eyebrows furrowed in confusion. I couldn’t see his feet. Instead his legs seem to turn into smoke. I squinted my eyes to get a better look, but I still couldn’t see them.
Once he was in front of me, he knelt down so we were face to face. I had hoped it was just my imagination when looked and saw that the bottom of his legs seemed to end in smoke. But now after seeing him up close. He really wasn’t human. I didn’t utter a single word all I could do was stare at his eyes that were swirling with a million different colours. 
“What do you want” He snapped, which me me break out of his spell.
“W...What?” I managed to say.
The stranger looked at me in annoyance. “I said what did you want? Why did you summon me?”
I was completely confused. “Summon...” I said questioningly.
“Yes summon” He said, while making a sound of annoyance. He signaled to the empty water bottle in my hand. “You opened that didn’t you”





9 comments:

  1. Hey, this is a good start, i look forward to reading the final copy. Personally i havent read this series, so i am looking forward to see what you come up with :)

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    1. I completely love this series! But theres not much of a connection to the actual story in my fanfic, I just made new characters up in the same world. Anyway thanks for the comment :)

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    2. Oh i see, well thats cool :) i kind of did the opposite in my own fan fic, i had different worlds but the same characters but with different names :)

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  2. looking forward to reading it once you have more of a foundation.

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  3. You could put more into the draft would help write up your final. Since your draft is very vague at the moment! Good luck!

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    1. Thanks, its late but I tweaked this post a bit.

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  4. Ill wind is my jam! haha -- hope you have a bit more of your draft and in fact your final by now! x

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    1. Wow it's great you've heard of it! No one seems to know about it, we need to spread the word :) and yes I just posted it a few minutes ago.

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